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Organization XIII Set-A KH Set by 1227-UPDATED-
11-06-2009, 11:53 AM (This post was last modified: 11-11-2009 09:07 AM by 1227.)
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MyBB Organization XIII Set-A KH Set by 1227-UPDATED-
[Image: ri6ft3.jpg]-A tribute to 358/2 Days-
Images are combined by me using GIMP,Holos by me and images by google.

Destiny Islands
Sora, Wielder Of The Keyblade (Click to View)
Riku, The Darkness Master (Click to View)
Organization XIII
Organization XIII Number I, Xemnas The Superior Of The In-Between (Click to View)
Organization XIII Number II, Xigbar The Freeshooter (Click to View)
Organization XIII Number III, Xaldin The Whirlwind Lancer (Click to View)
Organization XIII Number IV, Vexen The Chilly Academic (Click to View)
Organization XIII Number V, Lexaus The Silent Hero (Click to View)
Organization XIII Number VI, Zexion The Cloaked Schemer (Click to View)
Organization XIII Number VIII, Axel The Flurry Of Dancing Flames (Click to View)
Organization XIII Number XI, Marluxia The Gracefull Assasin (Click to View)
Organization XIII Number XII, Larxene The Savage Nymph (Click to View)
Organization XIII Number XIII, Roxas The Key Of Destiny (Click to View)
Specials
Xion, Number XIV (Click to View)
Terra, The Lingering Senitiment (Click to View)
Twilight Town Nobody, Roxas Keyblade Wielder (Click to View)
Traps & Spells
My Friends Are My Power (Click to View)




well this so far.rate and rep!so I can post more!
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11-06-2009, 11:58 AM
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RE: Organisation XIII Set-A KH Set by 1227-REPS ARE WELCOME!
You know you spelled Organization wrong?

I will rate once you post the effects.

Holos and Sora's pic looks good though. Very Happy
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11-06-2009, 12:13 PM
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RE: Organization XIII Set-A KH Set by 1227-REPS ARE WELCOME!
updated!Marluxia added!gonna rate now?
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11-06-2009, 12:24 PM
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RE: Organization XIII Set-A KH Set by 1227-REPS ARE WELCOME!
Sora is OP'd just at the end. I would lower the amount of ATK/DEF he gets.
Riku is good.
Xemnas is UP'd. You should lower his level.
Marluxia's last effect makes no sense. It says when you have no cards in your hand you can Special Summon a monster from your hand. Backround is lol.
OCG has errors.
Capitalization and spelling needs some work too.
7/10
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11-06-2009, 12:37 PM (This post was last modified: 11-06-2009 12:39 PM by 1227.)
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RE: Organization XIII Set-A KH Set by 1227-REPS ARE WELCOME!
OK i fixed Marluxia and Sora also added Xigbar
what is UP'ed?
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11-06-2009, 12:49 PM
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RE: Organization XIII Set-A KH Set by 1227-REPS ARE WELCOME!
Xigbar looks fine, and it's an interesting effect. For counters though, proper OCG is that the first time you say the name, in this case XIII Counter(s), you add quotation marks around it. Then every other time, you still have XIII Counter(s), but you don't have quotes around it. So Xigbar's effect would be as follows:

Each time your opponent activates a Spell Card, place 1 "XIII Counter" on this card. For each XIII Counter, this monster's level is reduced by 1. When this monster's level is 1, decrease your opponent's LP by 1000 and remove this card from play.

I actually just fixed his entire OCG and spelling. XD
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11-06-2009, 02:14 PM
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RE: Organization XIII Set-A KH Set by 1227-REPS ARE WELCOME!
thanks!
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11-07-2009, 11:11 AM
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RE: Organization XIII Set-A KH Set by 1227-Terra added!
Terra added!
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11-07-2009, 11:55 AM
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RE: Organization XIII Set-A KH Set by 1227-Terra added!
dude is it me or are xigbar and terra the same person
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11-07-2009, 11:59 AM (This post was last modified: 11-07-2009 12:00 PM by destron.)
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RE: Organization XIII Set-A KH Set by 1227-Terra added!
Larxene seems useless, as her only effect is a drawback and it's not like she's that powerful in stats. Roxas is OP'd as he has no drawbacks and can have 2800 ATK easily. He should be a 4-star plus give him a drawback. Terra is OP'd as he will almost always have an ATK/DEF boost, but then again, synchros are usually OP'd and he requires 4 tributes. Hmm, I can't decide if he's OP'd or not XD. His second effect is useless however, as you can always do that.
(11-07-2009 11:55 AM)riku Wrote:  dude is it me or are xigbar and terra the same person

That's just you. XD
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11-07-2009, 12:00 PM
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RE: Organization XIII Set-A KH Set by 1227-Terra added!
Nice..nice. OCG needs improvement though. Monster isn't always capitalized. Its, Level 4, Level is capitalized. You do not need quotations around a Counter. Its place, not put, it use to be put, but is now place. Deck and Graveyard is capitalized too.

Heres Xemnas' fixed OCG.

Each time a monster is destroyed due to a card effect, place 1 XIII Counter on this card (max. 3). Once per turn you can remove any amount of XII Counters from any face-up monster you control (excluding this card) to increase your life points by 500 points. When this monster has 3 XIII Counters on it, remove it from play and Special Summon 1 "Xemnas Final Form, Ruler Of Nothingness" from your Deck or Graveyard. If this monster is removed from play, destroy all Spell and Trap Cards on the field.
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11-07-2009, 12:01 PM
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RE: Organization XIII Set-A KH Set by 1227-Terra added!
i still think terra and xigbar are the same person
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11-07-2009, 12:02 PM (This post was last modified: 11-07-2009 12:47 PM by 1227.)
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RE: Organization XIII Set-A KH Set by 1227-Terra added!
(11-07-2009 11:59 AM)destron Wrote:  Larxene seems useless, as her only effect is a drawback and it's not like she's that powerful in stats. Roxas is OP'd as he has no drawbacks and can have 2800 ATK easily. He should be a 4-star plus give him a drawback. Terra is OP'd as he will almost always have an ATK/DEF boost, but then again, synchros are usually OP'd and he requires 4 tributes. Hmm, I can't decide if he's OP'd or not XD. His second effect is useless however, as you can always do that.
(11-07-2009 11:55 AM)riku Wrote:  dude is it me or are xigbar and terra the same person

That's just you. XD
Could you fix it like XigbarXD
(11-07-2009 12:00 PM)Sora Wrote:  Nice..nice. OCG needs improvement though. Monster isn't always capitalized. Its, Level 4, Level is capitalized. You do not need quotations around a Counter. Its place, not put, it use to be put, but is now place. Deck and Graveyard is capitalized too.

Heres Xemnas' fixed OCG.

Each time a monster is destroyed due to a card effect, place 1 XIII Counter on this card (max. 3). Once per turn you can remove any amount of XII Counters from any face-up monster you control (excluding this card) to increase your life points by 500 points. When this monster has 3 XIII Counters on it, remove it from play and Special Summon 1 "Xemnas Final Form, Ruler Of Nothingness" from your Deck or Graveyard. If this monster is removed from play, destroy all Spell and Trap Cards on the field.

You are the best Sora!
Larxene's effect is so ... because i hate her!
Axel added!
Vexen Xaldin added!I'll add Number V/VI/VII tommorow!
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11-08-2009, 09:03 AM
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RE: Organization XIII Set-A KH Set by 1227-III/IV/V and many more added!
Lexaus and Zexion added!
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11-08-2009, 11:00 AM
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RE: Organization XIII Set-A KH Set by 1227-VII/IX/X/XIV REMAINING!
i'll add the rest tommorow!
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11-08-2009, 01:00 PM
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RE: Organization XIII Set-A KH Set by 1227-VII/IX/X/XIV REMAINING!
Would really like to see Xemnas(Final Form) and Xion^^ Give you 7/10
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11-08-2009, 01:06 PM
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RE: Organization XIII Set-A KH Set by 1227-VII/IX/X/XIV REMAINING!
Then come back tommorow!Wink
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11-08-2009, 03:20 PM
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RE: Organization XIII Set-A KH Set by 1227-XION ADDED :P
XION ADDED!
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